Past the Ceilings created by marslaunch 15 years ago

Plays: 377 Favorites: 9
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Genre: Rock/Metal Mood: Dark/Heavy Theme: Other

In the absence of truth
I bid thee farewell
So long sweet sorrow

Enter into
Where the room splits as two

Not too far

There forever remains
Surroundings to push away

Overcome the ground you stand on

Hide and try to redefine a meaning you have yet to find


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Sorena2009 - 14 years ago

I agree with mega,she is a very insightful person.Your use of personal vocals, instrumentals and poetry is clever and spelling raw talent.Make your vocals less dragging, with better inflections and at this level of instrumental skill and creativity I bet you'll keep making some really cool alternative music.You have a great feeling for creating an atmosphere backed up by an idea.

megaKittycat - 15 years ago

you have a unique style..I feel the vocals are a bit sort of umm dragged out..as in slow but i like this

angelhouse - 15 years ago

have you hired thom??

xShezZangx - 15 years ago

lol nice song! =D

marslaunch - 15 years ago

Yes that makes me happy, your opinion on the singing in my other one Open Door would be much appreciated when you have time.

xShezZangx - 15 years ago

sorry, i love the singing is very different than a lot of other voices you hear in the world and the drums i love. The background guitar and bass are really cool. =D is that better? lol

marslaunch - 15 years ago

I just gave you an in depth review of yours, and all you said was nice song! Not fair! lol

kana3 - 15 years ago

Great song. Nice sweet voice. :)

franznar12 - 15 years ago

Nice, Great guitar choice nice drums,, it is excellent...

MrRoyal - 15 years ago

This sounds good man, your music keeps getting better!

marslaunch - 15 years ago

Thanks bro, I'm starting to make an effort ;)

shadowknight - 15 years ago

do you have singing in all of yours? hahaha XD

shadowknight - 15 years ago

no its good but amusing

marslaunch - 15 years ago

is that good or bad? which song is best vocally? Thanks for your insight.

shadowknight - 15 years ago

oh they are but its incredibly amusing and not to mention the singing cause i haven't heard anyone sing like that before

marslaunch - 15 years ago

Thanks for faving my songs, I hope they were somewhat cool.

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